Reviews for Distracted
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Interesting, original, and good for a short poem. The word choice of the line "Tomorrow is pattern" seemed a little off though and with a poem as short as this, a line being a little off, offsets the poem more than it typically would. Still, this piece speaks clearly with your style and originality.
incognegro chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
This piece is very concise and brief, which is good in poetry. It forces the reader to draw his or her own conclusions about what the poem means - it makes the reader THINK. The speaker merely SHOWS (sets the scene), doesn't tell. That's excellent.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Fictionpresses old links not working and you changing your name made you hard to find

I love that ending.. great piece
lackluster chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
hmm...it's like magnet poetry. i like the first stanza.