Reviews for earthquakes in my dream |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I this is the best piece I've read in quite a while. The tension built up very nicely with clearly voiced metaphors, and then came peace... very nice, very good. Not often can one be so clear with metaphors, but you've done it here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *stares* OMG that was bloody awesum!I loved it, the wording was great 2. I really liked the way u described ur emotions thru lines like 'bless me a tourniquet' and 'from Zeus' bare hands' It was great *adds 2 favs if there is room* GREAT WORK! Keep it up_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful. Thoughtful. Indepth |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really liked this. it flowed real nice and the imagery is just fantastic!hence why i loved it. keep up the awesome kick ass work!can't wait to read more from you!-dbd |