Reviews for WIT Witch in Training
xy-z chapter 5 . 3/29
Hm, this story just doesn't do it for me.

Sometimes you use wrong words and that feels jarring.

And how can she learn in 3 weeks sth that other failed before who had longer to study for it. And it seems she did not do much in those 3 weeks as you gloss over them (which is fine if nothing happens but if nothing happens how can she be prepared?)

Everyone has different tastes. Thank you for sharing this story.
Brimo94 chapter 25 . 2/16
This is a beautiful story…I read it all in one sitting and I'm so happy that I came across it :) I want to commend you for how creative it is and how lightly and enjoyably it flowed. Thank you for writing this :)
brinalovesyouxx chapter 25 . 12/30/2012
Ok now THAT was a beautiful story. And the sequel, i cant wait to read! I really like how the story progressed because like all of your other stories that ive read, it was quite driving and i couldnt wait to read the next chapter. Once again, beautifully written, so keep up the awesome work! :D xx
An Avid Reader Forever chapter 25 . 12/26/2012
great story
Guest chapter 25 . 11/6/2012
You are one of my favorite authors, but this story just didn't do it for me. I read it all out of stubburness, but I think if you put in some detail, explain instead of tell, longer sences, less chopy. Think 4d not 2d. Bacislay take the charcters plot and idea, and sort of revise it you could have an amazing story on your hands:-)
-SoundOfSight
mydreamadventure chapter 5 . 8/31/2012
hey i really like this really really like this its very interesting and captivating. but one thing i think you need to read over the chapters because some spelling is off and some sentences confuse me a little with how they are worded, in the wrong way or a word is missing or something and some words are wrong like you would say it instead of if or something like that. but otherwise i am loooooving this story, keep it up! :D
pinkcar7956 chapter 25 . 8/5/2012
YOUR STORY IS AMAZING! 3
Preposterous chapter 25 . 5/3/2012
Great story. But I sorta wish the rest of the Ferraz's had died in a mysterious accident...
Preposterous chapter 24 . 5/3/2012
Yay! Logan's getting his own cute love story.
Preposterous chapter 22 . 5/3/2012
The thing with logan is bittersweet.
Preposterous chapter 13 . 5/3/2012
That's insightful of her.
Preposterous chapter 12 . 5/3/2012
Oh wow. Why are they keeping her away from Logan?
Preposterous chapter 10 . 5/3/2012
If that doesn't sound shady, then I obviously don't know the meaning of the word.
Preposterous chapter 8 . 5/3/2012
Wow. This chapter almost made me cry.
Preposterous chapter 5 . 5/3/2012
This is like Harry Potter! Except with cool new magic and a whole different set of characters
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