Reviews for Can't Be
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
I really enjoyed it. Great job. Nice job keeping the flow and again the rhyming. The only problem i had was the last two lines. It kind of caught and stoped the flow. But i reread it adding (This ( before can't be and it works fine. But again it could all be this little old person reading it.

Mandi(loversdream17)
purple x pen chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
i like this, its interesting, something about the way you write has drawn me in.