Reviews for Emergancy Line
MariellaSpeaks chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Strangely, I have to first offer you a compliment on your summary... it was very poetic in itself and made me really interested in reading the poem.

That being said, I really liked this. You approached a very gruesome topic without descending into cheap gore like many poets do. People's dismissal of suicide (and its victims) is a really intriguing topic, and I liked the way you illustrated it. "She'll weather through" - I felt immensely sad at this line, both in the beginning and end... I think that was probably the most clever bit about this poem. It was a powerful line and really epitomizes the idea of the piece.

Good work - I look forward to reading the rest of your work!
Noom chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
Beautiful writing style, and a very deep topic. I love it :3
Star in the Night Sky chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
stolen hugs chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
...amazing. You captured it perfectly. Thank you.
on the line chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
I can't say much more than 'Ouch'. And again. There's this feeling of urgency, but mingled with monotony, like it's just another usual habit, and it's just... ow.
Discreet Thoughts chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Strong indeed.
createanarchy chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
it's like a modern, more fucked up boy who cried wolf, if she does it enough times them surely she will get through it just like all the rest of the times.

likes alot

lilyqueen777 chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
wow! this is wonderfully written and i enjoyed reading this adding to my c2!
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
This was fucking brilliant. It blew me away completely. I was just left gaping at the computer screen, wondering if there'll ever be a day when I can write like this.

Gorgeous, darling.