|Reviews for Some More Thoughts|
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Great ending. "Who cares?/It's only skin". I can see the dot-dot-dot on the end of the though, just trailing off a bit as the music dies. It's all good.
We're not going into specifics, because I'm lazy and tired. It was entertaining and thought-provoking. I'll be inspirated to write something later, I'm sure ...
Yours was chaotic, too. Writing from the heart fun. It's a quality pasttime and no one gets hurt!
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
That was pretty good. I like your sense of humor.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
| Little Junkie chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
seeing as you are sixteen, I was hoping for a little more mature writing, and a poem that held some substance. But I stuck it out and read through your random nonsense, poor rhyming, and awkward sentencing, and actually enjoyed the last few lines.
"She looks good naked/Or at least I think so/I don’t know/Who cares?/It’s only skin"
for some reason, that seemed quite good to me.