Reviews for Boys Will Be Boys
hey maria chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
I think it was a little too short, so there wasn't enough time for the action or resolution to take you by surprise. It was fairly easy to predict where this was going, and if it had been longer and the events more detailed, the last sentence would have more impact. But I guess the purpose of this story is to convey a moral, and it was successful in that aspect. It was also well-written and believable; I liked it. Good job.