Reviews for September
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Die erste Zeile ist genial, das wäre auf Deutsch nicht möglich gewesen, zuviele lange Wörter
SunFlower737 chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
this was a different approach to nature and september. its a good one! Very good haiku!
The Forgotten Maiden chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
The first line sounds , quite a creative haiku.
Basara chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
is that a bee?

O.O

nice...
ygg chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Auch.. that hurts! Great last line.. makes you really feel the pain.