Reviews for Everything To Lose
summbodyy037 chapter 10 . 10/27/2011
SOOOOO GOOD! I love this story!
pterodactylion chapter 10 . 10/25/2011
HarderToBreathe chapter 10 . 10/25/2011
Yay! I'm so happy you posted this chapter. I'm a little surprised that Ben spilled the beans but at the back of my mind that's expected out of Ben, he really likes Goldie. Great chapter! I hope to see another post soon please please please! :D Keep on writing!
Angelmom chapter 10 . 10/24/2011
I'm reading it. Hurry and finish please
springdaisy chapter 10 . 10/24/2011
I'm still reading it! haha. Please do finish it, regardless of how long it'll take you! I would really like to see how the story progresses, so far I think you're doing a great job of building up Maddie's character, and her interaction with Ben. Keep it up :)
Geeky Punk chapter 10 . 10/23/2011
i love it! great fic! keep updating!
Lindsay Marie chapter 10 . 10/23/2011
Hi there! I'm still reading, which is kind of amazing since this is the only thing I'm still reading on fictionpress. Kind of outgrew it. It just shows how good your story is! Anyway, the sexual tension in this chapter was seriously palpable. Good job! I hope to see more!
Kellet chapter 10 . 10/23/2011
I actually love Ben in this chapter. Really. At first, I just thought he was an obnoxious tool who couldn't get any girl in bed without coercion, but there was that chapter where Maddie says he confessed that he couldn't get her out of his head (which totally strummed on my heartstrings). Then he does something completely asshole-like, like scoping for platform stuff and, ugh. He's infuriating.

Obviously Maddie has her flaws, and she by no means is of exemplary character. I mean, seriously? Fucking some guy to forget someone else? That's awful. But Ben is so much worse 'cause he acted like that right from the get-go, whereas she did 'cause I think she sort of knew Ben could take it (the rejection, I mean).

What I'm trying to say is, I hate Ben. He sucks. He's so real and human and he's so not above pettiness. But it's also obvious he's into Maddie and loves playing her because she reacts so well and just, yeah. Their chemistry is amazing.
HarderToBreathe chapter 9 . 7/28/2011
Please please please UPDATE SOON! Goldie and Ben are soooooo into each other. Maddie's just doesn't realize it yet. And I love how even after all what Maddie did to Ben, he didn't go to bed with Soo Min. :) MORE MORE MORE! PLease! :DDD
leavemeialone chapter 9 . 7/28/2011
I really do hope that you update. I do love this plot, I do understand it is a little cliche but still it occurs pretty often in people's lives. People have a one night stand and sometimes it ends up being more. In this case, I do like how it is being more. I know it is hard to stop pining over your best friend, but Ben sounds really hot. He likes her. I really have enjoyed it this far.
strangledice chapter 9 . 5/13/2011
Great story!Nice job!

Please continue..
veyo chapter 9 . 2/16/2011
blithe.serendipity chapter 9 . 12/31/2010
I like the idea. Good writing as usual. I just hope you decide to update soon :) please. I'll be waiting to read it.
pterodactylion chapter 9 . 12/23/2010

I'm so sorry that this took so long, guys...


I can't live without hearing the end of this story ): PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER ;)

The story is really good (:

And it's nearly 2011. So. New Years' present to your readers? Please? :D
A. Akira chapter 9 . 9/18/2010
Thank you for updating. I've always enjoyed this story and the tension between Maddie and Ben. Good luck with the writer's block - you're last update gives me hope for more!
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