Reviews for I Dug Myself a Pit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. Usually, in poems like this, the rhymes seem forced. But your words just flow off the tongue. I love the lines "And if I crouch, I can just barely fit my pride/ It's really an abysmal place to hide." On the other hand, I think the poem gets sloppy at the end. Otherwise, lovely work. Keep it up. |