Reviews for I Dug Myself a Pit
checkerboxed chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Hmm. Usually, in poems like this, the rhymes seem forced. But your words just flow off the tongue.

I love the lines "And if I crouch, I can just barely fit my pride/ It's really an abysmal place to hide."

On the other hand, I think the poem gets sloppy at the end.

Otherwise, lovely work. Keep it up.