that is so GOOD! I wish i had half the talent you do.

there were a few typos but i thought the message was carried out alright. nice job

I really like this. It sums up exactly how i feel right now. The depth of your words is very freeing and also has such a sadness to it.

The Knife part is very real and brings a very different perspective to the poem, its like a question that runs throughout.

Save me from my life, save me from the blade...

I have to say i really enjoyed this, although there are some spelling mistakes which effect the flow when reading but don't ruin the whole eloquence of the poem. Well done this is excellent.

Losta Love~AC~