Reviews for Upon the Rock
jennilyn.rose chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Wow, again. You always have a way with the word choice, making wonderful images. Definitely a fun read.
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Great imagery. I like how you personified the storm, made it into a living entity, a frightening beast. The last line (I now know why our house is built / Upon the Rock.) nearly made me laugh... since the speaker envied those who lived on the beach, until they got 'devoured' by the storm. It's kind of like, "Oh... I'm glad I like on this rock, then." Anyway, wonderful writing!
InkandIntrospection chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Chilling and intriguing. I enjoy the statement you make about society; the happy ones are often the most naive and unprotected, the unsatisfied the safest.