Reviews for Lang division |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely a read-a-loud piece. The last two stanzas are my favorites-brilliant, really. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did comprehend that it was about "Science and math kids speak a different language from English and art kids". Woo, I had a correct thought. It sounds like the narrator (English) has a fondness for "you" (math) though. There are some fun parts: "I don’t think in (parenthesis)", "analogue analogies", "don’t tell me it’s not possible to raise u to the power of infinity.", "It’s all stu(dying).". Very good. (Unfortunatly I don't remember what a palindrome is. Care to enlighten?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the opening line. it made me want to read more and that is something i look for poems. i like this. the format is pretty much the coolest thing of my life. :] keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the second, third and fourth stanzas, wow, those were truly mystical. You've combined poetry with such powerful diction, just amazing. adding to my favs on my account, just lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You definately did it well, and I admire you for trying to wriet something different. I liked this, mostly because I AM a science/math kid, despite my closet poetry habit. In real life, I am very inarticulate. So while this poem didn't make sense at times, I liked that, I liked that confusion. This was pretty and well written and interesting, so good job. Love the palindromes, love apple pi a la mean/median/mode, love the final lines. Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'apple pi a la mean/median/mode' is my favorite line. It kind of struck me as amusing. I don't understand the third stanza, but you know me, Maisha, I'm ten. I'm sur everyone else gets it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, I adore your poetry. It's always so interestingly lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this and I think the disjointedness really adds to the poem. |