Reviews for I Can't Go On
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
This piece is filled with strong emotions and wonderful feeling.

I really liked the bolded stuff.

Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
Cool. I really like this. Great job! Keep it up!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
Haha, yeah good job. Well, it wasn't a very funny poem. Good job and God bless.
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
i can relate. strong emotions, and i especially love the last line, though you had a typo error there. pretty clever, but you shouldn't have made it so outstanding - let people think, no? good and raw emotion.
Keith Anthony Power Campbell chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
Too hard to notice your cleverness since the "I" is all the way on the left and the "can't" is all the way on the right. I myself also resort to tricksome tricks from time to time, for example see my poem "Align Right", although I don't go out and say the trick in so bold a manner. In any event, nice poem ;p.