Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Egh! Andrew is such an *hole. I wish I was there to beat him up too! . Anywayz...thanks for the amazing chapter again. So glad that she's finally quiting that starvation diet of hers. ANd that everthings ok between Cam and her. Keep it coming! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok. So the deal is that I've been reading this story for about six hours now and I absolutely love it! I was totally in tears when her parents died. :( But I'm still loving what you're doing so far! Thanks for the story so far and heads up for more reviews! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO CUTE! Both Jake, talking her down, and Cam afterwards. AH! Excited for States! Can't wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked that she stood up to Andrew. Nice work. Have a fantastic summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I just rediscovered your story (I had been reading it on ) and I could scream I'm so happy. ok, ok, ok ... great story, I don't know how you do that, you're such a great writer it's just not fair... but I'll keep reading anyway. Please post more soon, I can't wait to read more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great story so far the only problem I have with it is that you sometimes mix to up with too. Besides that your grammer is fine and if you want a beta (if you don't have one already) to help you clean up some of those minor mistakes I'm free. But great job so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay it's seriously good you post fast write more soon por favor soon as you can very good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story Amber |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty damn excited for States! Can't wait for the next update! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep up the good work even tho this is from leik 2 years ago (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() a good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! KEEP IT UP |