| Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile |
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   Twilight Starr chapter 20 . 8/20/2007 The old fashioned grandpa was very mean, but Grandpa David is very nice. Well written chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 19 . 8/20/2007 The gifts were so cute. :) Good chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 18 . 8/20/2007 Such a sweet chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 17 . 8/20/2007 Well written chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 16 . 8/20/2007 The game of tag was so cute. It made me smile. :) Good chapter. Keira is up to training habits that are bad for her health. Uh-oh. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 15 . 8/20/2007 Best chapter so far. :) I love the brothers' lecture to Cam. It made me smile. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 14 . 8/20/2007 Aww, this chapter is so sweet and sad. It almost made me cry. Good, well written chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 13 . 8/20/2007 This chapter made me cry. Well written chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 12 . 8/20/2007 Good chapter. Cam's mom lays the compliments on thick, but she's nice. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 11 . 8/19/2007 Great chapter! I'm so glad she beat Adams in the second event. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 10 . 8/15/2007 Cam helping her family with her tradition was so sweet. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 9 . 8/15/2007 Why don't they just get together already? *Sighs* Good chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 8 . 8/15/2007 The fairy tale story was cute even if it wasn't original. Jake and Cam are very sweet guys. I like them. You have nice characters, but you really haven't delevoped the other guys of Jake and Cam's group. Maybe you will in later chapters. If you have some many characters in Cam's group you want to delevop them otherwise you could have had less characters. They have no reason for being there if basically all you say is they are his friend and their name. Good chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 7 . 8/15/2007 Cam is sweet! :) When someone breaks off from saying something you use dashes. Like when Keira said, "Oh, s-" And she stopped from completing the word otherwise on first impression it looks like a mistake until you read it. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr chapter 6 . 8/15/2007 Poor Keira. It was good of you to have her explain her history. When you change POV I suggest you use a header that says 'Name's POV' so it is clear there is a change instead of the reader inferring to understand the point of view has changed. This chapter gave insight into why Keira is the way she is, which was very smart. Good chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |