|Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile|
| N-K-W chapter 14 . 5/24/2012
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo, how could you drop a bomb like this on me NOW?
| N-K-W chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
I like Bella. :P
She is amusing.
| N-K-W chapter 2 . 5/24/2012
Harry Potter references for the win!
Also, I'm a little bit in love with your writing style, you should try and publish a book. :)
| N-K-W chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
| socialbutrfly1379 chapter 15 . 1/17/2012
Okay well...I kinda found some stuff.
"Jesus, you're always cold, aren't you?" Cam asked redundantly, since I certainly wasn't going to answer him.
that part, redundantly is repeatedly, but rhetorically is not meaning to be answered. I think rhetorically is the word you're looking for.
&&also, Dreher (I think that's how youu spelled it), is Cam's last name, no? Youu kinda made Christy call her by his last name..I kinda got confused when that happened.
Other than that, awesomee writing, I love this story.
| Brightheart chapter 33 . 1/1/2012
really nice story. enjoyed it a lot.
| HERsheKISSxoxo chapter 14 . 9/7/2011
I have to admit, i had to stop reading and calm myself down a few times after reading about Keiras parents' deaths. Im hooked onto this story
| Anon chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
So, I have been trying to find the story in Quizilla... but do you know how many "OMG! I'm in an All-BOYS Boarding School..but I'm a GIRL!1" stories there are? I've been trying to narrow it down to some specific keywords, but it's no use; I can't seem to find it. Although, I'm pretty certain I have read it before...
If anyone out there remembers the title or anything, please post it. Thank you.
| Anon chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Hello. Okay, so as I read the first chapter, I had a somewhat of a'Deja Vu' feeling. After a few minutes of trying to remember, I finally recalled I had already read this on Quizilla, a few years ago. Or, at least, I think I'm pretty sure I did. But, perhaps, you're the same author who had posted it? I'm terribly sorry if I'm falsely accusing you, but it just strikes me as odd... And another person already said they had also read the story, before.
I didn't/couldn't finish the story, so my review will be for the first three chapters. Maybe your writing(or whoever truly wrote this) improved? But if you, indeed, are the same author, then I think you should, re-read it and fix a few mistakes here and there, or add/take a few things. For example, you could be a bit more detailed. You could also make your main character have a few realistic flaws, not just make her clumsy. Too much of a Mary-Sue. And when you first presented all of Cam's friends, you shouldn't have added all of those names together. You should have wrote a name, describe him (not entirely, just something we could remember him by),etc. And when you described your main character, you didn't have to write an EXTREMELY detailed paragraph of her. We could have found out of her physical features as the story went on. Honestly, I don't think half of the people who read it will remember it. Things like that. Just re-write it (a few things, make them better), if you have a chance.
I agree with one fellow reviewer, that said you should have added more girls to the Boarding School. And that, even though Cam may be 'the most respectable guy in the school', he still is a teenage boy with raging hormones. I think that's it...Take care.(: Sorry if I came off as a bit of a bitch. I honestly didn't mean to. (Bear in mind, that is if YOU are the one who wrote it. If you didn't write it, maybe you should think that there's people like you who makes us writers delete our stories from here. You should seriously feel ashamed of yourself. Do you know how much work the true author put to this story? And here some idiotic person comes and steals it from her? And is your writing/creativity is THAT bad that you have to copy someone from Quizilla, nonetheless? Maybe YOU should try and write something. )
| witeaya chapter 33 . 7/4/2011
what i love most about the story is the characters.
i think u developed them quite well.
cam was too perfect(that's what made him so lovable) in my opinion but his assholish outburst in the hospital showed that he was in fact not perfect. and somehow that made me felt glad.
i really dont like any jealousy or ex-girlfren dramas and the absence of any of that in this story is refreshing. reading that sort of thing in fp stories just felt redundant somehow.
the ending may be a lil bit abrupt but i understand it's bc u already start writing the sequel.
and i hope u continue u update the sequel.
| Veronica chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
This chapter is really good. I like the way you explained everything.
| smurf-love chapter 35 . 3/4/2011
love it, at first i didnt really like it because of alot of grammer mistakes but i stuck with it and it got better and better
| 64ShatteredButterflys chapter 33 . 1/25/2011
this is really good keep writing!
| A Little Reality chapter 35 . 11/28/2010
There were some issues with how realistic this was- her rooming with Cam, her being the only girl accepted. . . But I'm sure I'm not the only one to comment on those, so I'll gloss over them.
The problem that was the biggest for me was how quickly they skipped right to 'I love you'- and when they did say it, it was like no big deal. It took all of the juicy build-up that makes romances so appealing.
| Ohcai chapter 34 . 11/28/2010
Sorry! There was just one more thing I forgot to add. Her struggle with anorexia... wasn't much of a struggle. That kind of bothered me. She slipped right into it, and just as easily, slipped out. Because of that, I think that the story would have been much better off without it. That's just me, personally.
I really do hope you don't take offense at these comments. I did like reading your work, or I wouldn't have read so far, would I