Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG ANDREW YOU # ! ? *BEP* . Uhm sorry xP . BUT I swear, if he raped her, i would hunt him down and whupp his sorry little a! Love your story , and the moment he was going to Aheem, in chapter 18 , gave me the chills! I know im a little behind, but i started reading the story, when you had already published chapter 21 . Love your story once again Good Luck , and keep on working! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, well i will be definitly waiting for the next chapter! Update as soon as possible please! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! Cam is being a jerk. I mean that was way below the belt. But they make such a cute couple. Keep it up. NS |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would've done more than smack him. Geesh. Other than that, UPDATE SOON! (even though you just did, but hey. never hurts to say to. lol) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. um. wow. go keira? stand up for yourself. she does NOT need him and his crap. and he does not need to talk about her parents like that. seriously, i would have flipped out and attacked him. he is horrible. jake better be okay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() geez. they can't catch a break can they? this was good, but kinda whoa. I feel really bad for him and her. I hope that she's not serrious about it being over. even though it was a below the belt remark she should forgive him. of course he'd have to appologise profously. but that's what love is all about. realising when they mean something, and when they're just venting. go for the mature love path! and not the immature high school fling one. write more! ~Mel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh drama, I love drama! Good on her too for standing up for herself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe that you left it like that! Well, I take that back yes I can, but I am very anxious to read more. By the way am I aloud to smack Cameron? He really needs a good smack right now, well tecnically another one but oh well. Please update ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a nightmare |
![]() ![]() ![]() :( they got in a fight! that sux. cam's being such an ass! Keira's smart. I would have slapped him too. *turns away from Cam with arms crossed* She was just trying to be nice. My god. And that was really mean, to insult her, using her parents' deaths. I'm starting to not like him. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god! no! but yes go keira he was being a jerk i would have punched him! can't wait for more, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No. I cant believe she broke up with him. And I know that Cam's sad, but that was really low of him to talk to Keira like that. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() trouble! wow that grandpa was HARSH. i wouldn't know what to do in her shoes. And that roger dude is freaking me out too! NEVER let her be in the same room alone with him. NEVER! ok sweets, update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() isnt her name keira LOCHTE not dreher? because you call her parents lochte in chapter 13/14. oh well just wondering |