Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile
ritapita chapter 20 . 6/26/2007
oh man, i love this story. i'm so glad you updated!

i really, really like it, and i wasn't sure if you were going to finish it or just kinda leave us hanging. but i'm really glad that you did continue it and i hope you update soon.

hopefully nothing too bad will happen with richard, but we'll see . . . !
ihrtbks chapter 20 . 6/26/2007
*claps because this story is so good* *growls because I have to wait for an update* I LOVE THIS STORY, especially your writing style and plot twists and characters. Your characters are extremely easy to relate to. I WANT A CAM NOW!

But your paragraphs are kind of bunched up and might be better if you spaced them a little more. You also mix up 'to' (before and after a verb) and 'too' (synonymous with also, overly, as well), and "you're" (you are) and "your" (possesive, could be replaced with 'my' or 'our' or 'their'). But you have to continue.

falsenotions chapter 20 . 6/26/2007
sounds like richard's a bit interested in keira. hope not(:

anyway, nice story.. keep it up.
Endowment's Seraph chapter 20 . 6/26/2007
this is wonderful. made me cry, even in this chapter at the begining when her parents were brought up. i thought you portrayed the deaths and the hospital and feeling all wonderfully. perfect. I love it! I stayed up till 2am reading it all and I can't wait to read more!

outsidersgirl chapter 20 . 6/25/2007
this is good
princess.lame chapter 20 . 6/25/2007
yay! You updated! It didn't have anything to do with me being incredibly rude a few days ago, did it? lol. Sorry. This chapter was really good! Keep it up!
ThatOneGirlHidingBehindAMask chapter 19 . 6/24/2007
i absolutly love this chapter

i'd really like there to be some realistic angst between some of the boys they just seem to be two ... nice and flawless... and we all know "no ones perfect"

i think your awesome for updating
Menadoa chapter 13 . 6/24/2007
OMIGOODNESS, i'm practically sobbing. This chapter was really good. I'm going to go read the rest of them now. :-)
psycho-vampire-princess chapter 19 . 6/23/2007
Aw! It's so sweet. Is this the end or is there more? I think the plot is good and unexpected.

Blabsey91001 chapter 19 . 6/23/2007
aww! that's so sweet! that must hav cost a fortune tho! but they're rich, so oh well. haha
The Fates03 chapter 19 . 6/23/2007
good story! It was so sweet and touching. I actually cried when i found out that Keira's parents had died!Typical girl aye(lol)..But a really really really good story. I was actually wondering, if ur going to write more or thats the end of it which is chapter 19? C u round
The Midnights Sun chapter 19 . 6/22/2007

im gonna cry!

that was so sweet!

amazing job! that was worth the wait!

please update soon!

or else...hah!

outsidersgirl chapter 19 . 6/22/2007
this is good
Menadoa chapter 6 . 6/22/2007
it was good, but extremely long. i think it would've been just a little better if all that was summarized just a little.
teardropsONroses chapter 15 . 6/19/2007
did you know ficpress only lets you review once on each chapter? I've actually read all of the chapters on this story, but I'd already reviewed the other chapters. Is there more, or is that the end?
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