Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I agree with bella ADORABLE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MOVIE MARATHON! That sounds so cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Blushing is FUN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Begining |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUDE! I love it! I love it I love it I love it! HOWEVER~ 0_0 IS SHE TURNING ANOREXIC? my god if I spelled that wrong...*grumble* but OMG! Keep writting, I LOVE IT! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I LOVED this story! It was awesome. The only thing I didn't like was the profanities. I really do appreciate you not totally spelling out some of them. But this is going on my Story Alert list. :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh dont worry. they didnt offend me. it was just that, as i was reading. the cuss words were written very differently. like, they were written like as just the first letter. and i had to guess what the word was. and i wasnt sure if you did that purposely, or if it was just a mistake. i'm sorry, i didnt mean for you to think that i had been offended. thank you for this update/chapter! keep up the awesome work. i cant wait for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() RAWR :) Vey, I'm VERY disappointed in Kiera. I mean she did SO well in that first competition. I really want to smack som self esteem into that and HOW does she POSSIBLY think that not eating properly will help her? She'll only hurt herself AGAIN. and then she'll feel like a failure AGAIN. Because she WOULD be, since SHE caused herself to end up like that. UGH I really hope Cam does something SON. I don't want them to break up over her stupidity, but I've got a bad feeling about their relationship now :S:S Goodluck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! An update! Cam and Keira are so cute together, hopefully Cam's going to notice her eating habits. I really love this story, update again soon! A month was too long to wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok... wait... i'm adding it to the favorites now... i kinda forgot... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm... this is a fascinating story line... i'll just add this in my favorites and continue reading when i have time |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey loved the chapter. im interested to see where thise eating training thing is going with her. update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really do like this chapter too! the whole eating disorder is a very natural next step for this story, i think. you do very well by showing how it's brought on by such a SMALL comment by an insignificant character, or so it would seem. and you write about it with a thorough understanding, i'm impressed. i'm also impressed at how you showed the boys noticing. the comments about "she didn't know how bad it would be" aren't really neccessary, that foreshadowing is clear on its own! Still lovin it and waiting (semi-patiently) for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muuwwahahahahaa! Sorry I have been reading your story since the 8th chapter but i never got aroun to creating an account and I must say I love it! Keep it up and no worries froom me about the updating. I have the same problem right now. So keep it up and great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() woho update! i wonder why that bitch attacked her like that,and i cant believe she would believe any of it! i hope cam helps her really soon. great job update soon! |