Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great update! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YAY, you updated! I am so glad you updated. I absolutely love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far! It's really good, a few grammatical problems, but nothing major. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats. 60,0 quite alot :D update though. make it more lol cause its interesting. and i loved how cam told her off XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() DEFFO the most liked :) but you realize.. now you have to explain about Brad. *glares* i'm not liking him if he left Kiera gr. YAYAYAYAYAY. LOVE CAM. lol keep writing :) i'm sure others wanna know more just like me :) goodluck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I really liked that. Reading this has been really fun! And 60 words, huh? That's a pretty big deal. Congrats! And don't stop writing it's getting good! -Ryu |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did love it! I am so glad they are together! I hope the story is going to continue. I know this was a big event/conflict in the story, but I would love to read until at least the end of the year. I would like to read about how keira deals when Cam graduates and all the other guys go too. I don't know how highschools work in the USA, but in Canada we can choose to go back for a 5th year if we want to either improve our grades or take more optional courses we didn't have enough space for in our schedule before. because if you CAN do that, it would be cool. Either way, I love that you have stuck with this to 60 0 words! that is an amazing accomplishment, i can honestly say, as a writer (not so much on fp as just on my own). I admire your work and really hope that this is just the beginning, now that they're together. I hate it when the couple just gets together then two chapters later it's over. If that does happen, i'll still like it, it's just you have so many options still that can take a while to explore, if you so choose. anyways, I lookforward to the next chapter! yours truly, Ginne |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the update! they're finally together! although, I can't help but suspect happiness will not last forever...something bad always happens. And by bad, I mean aside from her parents dying, which is already pretty terrible in itself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last few chapters have been AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg..LOVING this chapter..so totally amazing..omg omg omg Cam and Keira are so adorable together..Cam is just too sweet...and ugh stupid biatch Christy..she defnitely got what she deserved..haha ..anyways update son..cant wait to see what will happen next..ciao |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE LOVE LOVE-ED it! amazing!i dont kow what else to say it was amazing! oh btw i changed my name penname from xoArox to x Tequila Moonlight x. great job can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! i loved this chapter. i loved what she said to christy. shes a b*h and im glad cam showed her. lol im so excited they are finally togethere |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter! I love this story! You have done a great job with it. Update as soon as you can! |