Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile |
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![]() ![]() ![]() okay this story is awesome! i dont know much about writing s i wouldnt be able to criticize it...but damn this is good! i love it! this is one of the best stories ive read here so far. anyways i hope you continue writing it! :D:D:D ps. i'll love you forever if you continue it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i lyk ur story 's very original and way u wrote was quite refreshing too, but the converstions were a lil lengthy..i think u r an obvious fan of pirates of the carribbean. :D first of all, ur character is named keira and they watch pirates of the u cont posting,cant wait to read what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait to c Bella |
![]() ![]() ![]() sparks flying What was up wit Cam's mood swing earlier |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm so waiting to see what happens when she meets the others. Cam is cool and laid back |
![]() ![]() ![]() heyi thought your story was pretty good and please update soon! lol, i read stuff off of fictionpress during school cuz i get so bored and i'd love to hear more of it |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, i love ur story, u should add a really *interesting* scene for the movie |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story so far. It has a lot of potential. can't wait for the next chapter. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I really like your story. It's and looks like it could go into some very interesting places. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I only have one thing to say... Keira seems a bit static. Make her have some faults... other than that, good job, and i'll look forward to the next update. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. D more! I hope you stay in Keira's P.O.V. though... somehow, multiple P.o.v.s seem to bother me \... I just added you to my favorites list |
![]() ![]() ![]() whosh. I like it D. do update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() your first original fiction piece? i'm impressed. this is really good. i loved it (: i'll be watching out for more updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this. My only issues were: I noticed a couple typing errors (ex "Turning bright red as I understood what her meant,". One thing I would also suggest is that you don't put any author notes in the middle of your story. It ruins the flow and makes it kind of hard to read. But I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you post more. |