Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile
locogia4life chapter 3 . 10/24/2006
okay this story is awesome! i dont know much about writing s i wouldnt be able to criticize it...but damn this is good! i love it! this is one of the best stories ive read here so far. anyways i hope you continue writing it! :D:D:D

ps. i'll love you forever if you continue it!
dear.dia chapter 3 . 10/8/2006
i lyk ur story 's very original and way u wrote was quite refreshing too, but the converstions were a lil lengthy..i think u r an obvious fan of pirates of the carribbean. :D first of all, ur character is named keira and they watch pirates of the u cont posting,cant wait to read what happens.
M.D.Irvine chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
cant wait to c Bella
M.D.Irvine chapter 2 . 10/7/2006
sparks flying What was up wit Cam's mood swing earlier
M.D.Irvine chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
hmm so waiting to see what happens when she meets the others. Cam is cool and laid back
Mabisco chapter 3 . 10/2/2006
heyi thought your story was pretty good and please update soon! lol, i read stuff off of fictionpress during school cuz i get so bored and i'd love to hear more of it
Ruh chapter 3 . 10/2/2006
hey, i love ur story, u should add a really *interesting* scene for the movie
ellinikolouloudi chapter 3 . 10/1/2006
great story so far. It has a lot of potential. can't wait for the next chapter.

WalkingWithAGhost chapter 3 . 10/1/2006
Hey, I really like your story. It's and looks like it could go into some very interesting places. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it up.
EeeNAce chapter 3 . 10/1/2006
I only have one thing to say... Keira seems a bit static. Make her have some faults... other than that, good job, and i'll look forward to the next update. )
EeeNAce chapter 2 . 10/1/2006
I like it. D more! I hope you stay in Keira's P.O.V. though... somehow, multiple P.o.v.s seem to bother me \... I just added you to my favorites list
EeeNAce chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
whosh. I like it D. do update.
Unwritten Answers chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
your first original fiction piece? i'm impressed. this is really good. i loved it (: i'll be watching out for more updates!
godsandstars chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
I really liked this. My only issues were: I noticed a couple typing errors (ex "Turning bright red as I understood what her meant,". One thing I would also suggest is that you don't put any author notes in the middle of your story. It ruins the flow and makes it kind of hard to read. But I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you post more.
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