Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile
DA-chen1 chapter 22 . 4/4/2010
How sweet!

First, he was this big of a jerk but then he learned his lesson too! :)

I really love your story!

I Murder on Impulse chapter 32 . 3/29/2010
Still loving the story!


DA-chen1 chapter 19 . 3/28/2010
How sweet of the boys! :)

I really love your story more and more!

DA-chen1 chapter 11 . 3/28/2010
Hahaha, shit happens .. to Adam! :)

Love your story and Cam and all of them!

CrystalTeddyBear chapter 9 . 3/15/2010
Love it more than I love chocolate, which, may I say, is alot. My favourite character is Cam, he's so sweet. Ya know what? Stuff team Edward and Team Jacob... I'm on team Cameron! Oh when this is done, you have to write a sequel, it's so good that it's worthy of being published literally!

Love ya ! x
sahsah831 chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
I have been following your story straight from the beginning but i have never reviewed story is ever i read it i feel like im actually there.

keep writing!

Devilish Kisses chapter 29 . 2/22/2010
Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game, Kei," Jake rebutted.

Totally from "A Cinderella Story"! S'all good-it's a really good quote!

So, I've been following this story for quite some time and I really enjoy it! I love how Cam is so sweet and almost pathetic sometimes in his multiple attempts to show his evident love for Keira. I love how Keira can seem tough on the exterior, but she can still be girly and quiet too. I love how Jake really was able to calm her down in this chapter. I almost cried when her parents died :(

Story's amazing (obviously) and now it's time for me to do homework (sigh). Anyhoo, keep up the good work!

firefly114 chapter 32 . 2/14/2010
Hey! I began reviewing this a while ago, but I just finished your story this morning. Anyway, I loved it. There were a few things that bugged me about Kiera always thinking that she's so inferior, and all the boys thinking she's perfect, but once I got past that, it was a great story. She and Cam were so cute, and they better stay together forever because she really needs him! Are you considering writing a sequel? It could be interesting, dealing with the problems of her new competition, and having to deal with Cam so far away.
lookingforsomething1994 chapter 32 . 2/9/2010
I love you your story. It is so good. Please write more!
firefly114 chapter 6 . 2/5/2010
Hm, this was interesting, because it was the first one from Cam's perspective.

"No kidding, he never pulls out my chair for me." HAHA!
firefly114 chapter 5 . 2/5/2010
Yay! Cute chapter :)

- Jake and Cam said the exact same thing when they noticed she was tired in the morning.

- "Alright boys...and girl" Hahaha!

Oh, who's Greg?

Nice ending!
firefly114 chapter 3 . 2/4/2010
Cam's praise when she says she's only had one boyfriend seems a little...unrealistic, especially because he's in front of all his guy friends. Wouldn't he try to hide his crush a little better? Haha. And it almost seems like she's fishing for compliments. I'm the type of person who never believes when other people compliment me, either, but instead of making them explain themselves, I usually brush it off and try to make them stop.

Hahahah the movie marathon sounds so funny!
firefly114 chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
I liked this chapter! All the guys seemed so cute :)
firefly114 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Hey! So the reason I found this story because I am in the process of writing a boarding school story too, and I wasn't sure how realistic my school was, so I wanted to read some other stories.

I am in love with your first chapter :) I really like Kiera's two-sidedness, even though I think you hammered in pretty hard in the beginning the fact that she doesn't think she's pretty but everyone else does.

Anyway, you have a lot written, and I'm going to read the rest! I might not get to the next chapter until later, though.
J.Mell chapter 32 . 1/27/2010
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SON! i love this story so mcuh and now i like swimming even more! please update soon because i cant live without this story!thankyou
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