Reviews for All She Had To Do Was Smile
esmeralda123 chapter 32 . 1/24/2010
fantastic )
Jayda123 chapter 32 . 1/23/2010
oh plz plz plz...dont tell me that was the end!

This had to be the best story that I've ever read on fictionpress!

plzz make a sequel

this story was so awesome...

i rly love how it revolves around swimming and romance and a whole bunch of other things at the same time..

If you continue this story or even make a sequel I promis to give to u all the praise you deserve..

(P.S. your a really great author!)
Jayda123 chapter 11 . 1/22/2010

That was a GReat chapter!

i was so nervous for her...

but man she did great!

luv this story...
moonlitsunset92 chapter 32 . 1/21/2010
OMG! love it! can't wait for the next chapter! : )
smileinthemira chapter 32 . 1/21/2010
Awe this is so cute hurry and update soon :D
outsidersgirl chapter 32 . 1/20/2010
VampiressAJ chapter 14 . 1/20/2010
I'm still reading this but I just have to say how much this chapter has touched me. My brother, whom I was extremely close to, passed away October 2009... So yeah this is really hard to read. I even debated to just stop reading it because of this. I havent been able to deal with it because I'm pregnant. But I decided to keep reading it because I do love this story. I'm actually going to bed though. I'll finish it tomorrow when I wake up. :)
MuggleBorn93 chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
I just read the first chapter and it is amazing! I'm so angry because it is 11 PM and I have to get to bed for school tomorrow, so I can't read anymore. Ugh. I'll probably try to read a few chapters tomorrow, but anyways back to the story lol.

I can tell just from the first chapter that this is going to be a very good story. I love how she is the only girl in the school and how unique and different she is. I also love how she was singing when she pulled into the parking lot. That's funny lol. I also love love love how descriptive you are and how the chapter was structured. You didn't leave out any details but you didn't add any unnecessary ones either. Keep writing and I hope to read more of your story soon! :)
danni-loves-too-reid chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
i love it!
lil and tiny chapter 31 . 12/16/2009
*squeals* Oh so cute! :D And yes, she slaughtered Andrew by one whole second! Oh, since no one seems to be having Jake proper, can I have him? :3
Minigolf chapter 31 . 10/28/2009
Wow this was amazing!

I'm completely hooked and attached to the characters!

Please please keep up the awesome job!

You do such an awesome job describing their swim competitions. It's like being in the pool with them and feeling that adrenaline rush. CONGRATS TO KEIRA FOR BEATING SNOBBY ANDREW!

Fishphobia chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
I loved it! Your writing reminds me very much of Meg Cabot, and I'm very serious. Good job, looking foreward to reading more. I'm somewhat intrigued by the best friend Nick, and I'm not sure why...:)


The one and only Chibs chapter 31 . 9/22/2009
Quaver Ava chapter 2 . 8/15/2009
Hey I'm her EXACTLY her height and I'm 109 pounds. M. Hey can I go on a date with her? (laughs.)
EspeciallyShameless chapter 30 . 8/13/2009
This story is amazing. I read up to this chapter, but you made me laugh, you made me cry (her parents, her anorexia, etc.) She is so cute.

It remembers me so much of my friends and I (they are all guys).

It is really nice I love it! keep your good work :)
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