Reviews for Crumpled love letter
arienaino yume chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
wow, You're style has definately changed in the last... 2 years? But you still invoke an amazing picture and bring your reader to see your surroundings and feel your emotions by drawing them into your world. love the line "the apartment reeks of us" it involves the senses and makes the poem seems much more personal to the reader. Hi, by the way