I loved the story though I think that the development of the romance was a bit rushed. He met Jacob and in three meetings he is in love? I think that Marcus needed to develop his feeling first, as he had just broken up Eli. Jacob should have needed a little more effort to break through his barriers. I also think that the end was also rushed. A bit more on the transformation and newness of the change.

On a whole it was an excellent story that could be a masterpiece with a bit of revision.

That's it?

No, actually, I think it was concluded very nicely. What an amazing story. *claps*

I loved this story...I seem to now be reading all your stories I haven't read yet.

I'm glad that you see Ian have a family and that Jacob changes galen...Even though he's like 30. Hehe...Over all I loved the story.

Now off to read more of your stuff_

Whisp

Absolutely beautiful, like everything that comes from your pen. I think I enjoy your longer works better; always a bit more time to develop characters, and you do it enviously well.

YES YES YES! THAT WAS A FANTASTIC FINISH! YOU ARE AWESOME XANTHOFILE AND I'M SO HONOURED TO HAVE READ THIS STORY AND YOUR OTHERS! Now, all I want is for you to update Rasta Guy, please? I've been waiting oh, so patiently and I think it's about time. This was awesomely written as all your other stories are. I just hope your fast updates are not declining.

MANY HUGS,

B.J./H-BGP

ps. this is on my faves. you rock!

I think you did great on this epilogue, it all wrapped up nicely.

Now...if you had somehow been able to work some sex in between him being bitten and dying...that would have been the icing on the cake _~

I loved this fic. I haven't read anything on FP like this at all. Jacob and Galen AW x 10,0

I'm glad galen got turned...I'd say he was getting a bit old, since jacob looks so young and all. I was wondering if he was going to be changed of not, but I guess i know now right? _

Hmm...would turning into a vampire mean that he can't do magic anymore? Otherwise, a very satisfying ending. I especially liked how Ian ended up being the first donor..very cute.

I loved this story. Immensly so~

Hm, well I like it. A peek into the future is always nice at the end of the story, and I'm glad that they can be together now.

. I love the ending line!

Overall, I like the remake, but I have to say that the usual tone of the story doesn't match the last few lines you decided upon. I don't like them - they just don't match at all for some reason.

As far as the rest goes, I like that we get to know Ian gets a family of his own and Jacob and Marcus get to be together, though a thirty-something looking vampire in my head just makes me laugh.

Blech, that was short. But as usual, I love your writings. And this story is differnt, unlike most, but I think I like it more.

So I just realized that I haven't reviewed this in forever. BUT. I've read every chapter. In fact, I pretty much hang on this fic. I really really love it. Excellent job.

I love & adore this story. galen and Jacob...aww! There just so cute together. This chapter was adorable/sexy. Their interaction with each other is just so cute. I can't belive its almost over..(

This story needs a friggin award or something.

_ It's def. going on my favs.

For some reason, one of the things going in my mind is "How did he clean up? Does he have extra clothes?" cause I'm a geek like that. Otherwise, I just think this chapter was really really cute and thank god they're finally together.