i loved this it was fantastic! cant wait for the epilogue! im not sure if this was on my favorites or not, but it is now! u r truly an awesome writer! i love your stories and i'll try to read more of them. BIYA!

HUGS!,

b.j./H-BGP

Aww, yay! LOL about the neighbors being all 'what the fuck?' that is funny.

Alas, I didn't ever think of anything better to say other than "yay!" and "I love it!" and "I can't wait for another update!" but I figure by now those are like an understood 1. And why is Jacob getting warm?

And compared to lots of things out there right now (and yes, I have enough time on my hands to read a lot of it... and vomit shortly thereafter) you write good slash. 'specially in Rasta Guy...

Okay, not pushing, not pushing. But i do miss it. And this review is gonna end up being 26,0 years long if I don't stop soon, cause I could ramble on forever, honestly. SO, I'll leave you with simply an "I can't wait for another update!"

Aw darn, only one more chapter.

I actually remember the 'you made me cum too' thing...but I definitely don't think there was a neighborhood joke and I'm pretty sure he left after that...Jacob that is. I think that was what went on.

I also think I remember the heartbeat coming back thing...maybe...didn't that happen before?

I loved this chapter! . Twas awesome!

Finally, he'll get over himself..I hope, at least.

yea i love how this is going. nice job! i especially like the end, even tho it scared the Hell outa me! but jacob and marcus' last couple of lines were so adorable and romantic. absolutely perfect for me! biya!

hugs,

b.j./H-BGP -

p.s. i told u i was gointa read this chappie right after i'd sent the message! lol

Ah! No! The end of the posted chapters. *sadness* More soon, I hope? Very good, I think I'm addicted.

I've been behind lately, but here I am, dutifully reading and reviewing.

the last chapter (6) didn't seem like the flow was weird if that's what you were referring to. Or maybe I'm still freakin' tired. I'm sick. I'll have to reread later.

In the mean time, I like how Marcus shells up because of his power. It's a pretty different spin on things and it makes him interesting - especially going catatonic after a kiss. I'd have a panic attack if someone when catatonic on me after I kissed them, but it makes sense for him to do such with his portrayal and his fear of touch.

Thus ends the review of a (usually) faithful fangirl.

Ah, so intense. "And like a whip, Jacob’s snarled words cracked the darkness into a billion shiny red fragments; 'You bastard, don’t you dare leave me!'" sends chills - the line has an incredibly classic feel to it: an eternal cry that fit perfectly here.

I delight in the drama and take pleasure in the reading - this story is wonderful.

Ah, Castaway...the memories...I cried SO hard when he lost Wilson. I got really attached to that little volleyball, and then when he fell off the raft and the guy couldn't reach out far enough to save him...so very tragic. It's irrational, I know, it's just a volleyball, but it was like my favorite character had died.

Wowza, glass. Ouchies.

While I was reading the note at the bottom of the page, I was drinking soda. Literally: as I was reading the words on the page, the cup was to my lips and I was sipping. I just sort of looked at the cup, looked at the screen, and set my cup down. It's still fizzing, despite that, I still thought it was pretty cool.

Love this story. I don't think I've read the orginal, but you're doing a great job on this.

Oh yay! I'm... just... Yay!

I may be a bit of a fangirl at this point, but please forgive me. I just really like your stories, they give me hope that good slash isn't dead, and the teenies haven't taken over. That, and they're mucho enjoyable to read. I get excited everytime I see that you've updated. So, yeah, those are my reasons for my complete retard-ness in not being able to leave a better review. I'll try to think of something to say between now and the next chapter other than "yay" and "I love it" and "I can't wait for another update"...

until then Yay! I love it! I can't wait for another update!

xanthofile, this did a load on my soft-hearted, romantic self. damn, i hate marcus but i luv how u made him realize how stupid and cowardly he was. u should make part of the next chapter about how jacob took it. if i was him i wouldve been bawlin my eyes even longer and harder than marcus. i feel so bad 4 them. my throat got a lump in it and my heart seriously felt like like some1 was squeezing it. man i LOVE this! like always, U AND UR STORIES R AWESOMELY FABULOUS! biya!

hugs!,

b.j./H-BGP

Captivating. This isn't as well written as some of the little bit of your work that I've read but it's got more...pull, I guess. It's the overwringing, the slightly too-much drama...the compelling characters that immediately yanked me into the story. I gave a little meep of frustration when I realized that I couldn't read on further. Marcus and Jacob are purely and wretchedly delightful. More please?