Hi, just to say your story is really cool and I hope that you will continue it!

Is Eli gone from this story for good? Who was in the closet? Maybe Marcus just wants to cut him off, perhaps it hurts less that way. I hope we get to find out why he couldn't sleep with Eli- what happened 'before'? And kudos to him for inviting Jacob to dinner. That was very sweet. Cheers to the next update!

This story has been flitting around my head quite a bit lately, it's nice to see an update, and a good one at that.

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“Slave driver.” I flicked an imaginary whip, and he sashayed as if dodging the blow.

I don’t remember the last time I ever let myself have this much fun.

XD Too cute.

the second part of the chapter was brilliant too...maybe even more so...oh hell, it was all brilliant. XD can't wait to read more

My gods, where Marcus and Jacob cute in this chapter. All that flirting and such? Cuteness. As to Marcus and Ian's brotherly issues...Ian was out of line, and there you go again with that teaser about their society and such. Why does Ian believe that all vampires are evil? How common is the whole "wizard" thing?

I think instead of brevity:The quality or state of being brief in duration;2. Concise expression; terseness,you meant levity or jocosity.

I don't know if I've actually reviewed you recently (and I'm sorry!) but here's your review.

I'm been so busy.

I do remember this story,...wasn't it shorter? I don't remember. I do remember I liked the ending.

Hm. Ian. I love the name Ian. I can't really blame him for blowing up at the mention of a vampire in the house.

I love the way Jacob and Marcus interact after dinner. They're awfully playful for two people that are lonely. Weird, but somehow...I like it...

Love.

love this story. itz been floating in my inbox for ages, and i just got round to reading it. so glad i did, itz marvelous. ] and yarr, thatz pretti damn cool...l0lz. pop 't wait to read more.

Thank gods I don't drink soda.

Also: this is just too sad. I really hope the guys here get a happy ending, because right now their lives seem almost tragic. They're perfect for an emo song, actually.

I thought this was gonna be a one-shot, so I read it expecting an ending...but there wasn't one. I was mucho distraught. Thus you have to continue this. Eventually. Whenever you want. I'm not going to harp on updating timely. Heaven knows I don't do that myself, but I digress. Anyways, I love it.

m...reads like something real yummy. Is this going to be continued?

Alas, this is one story that I haven't read before. Nice rewrite, though. I would love to know more about that world. Are witches and warlocks a common thing? Do they keep the knowledge about them underground? I guess I'll find out. I can't wait to see more.

XD Glad you're rewriting this! I didn't have a chance to read it all yet, but I decided to reveiw

Sorry but you did misspell necessary. :)I like this start but I am having a major deja vu moment. Have you posted this somewhere else or even on here before? As soon as I read the mark section it hit me that I know this story.