|Reviews for Awaken Me|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I like the stanza breaks in this-they bring a lot of power to the language you're using. There is a little much repetition in this for me; there can be strength in repetition, but it needs to be used fairly sparingly in order to make that ring right and I'm not sure the balance is met here. As often with your work, the sense of mysticism is strong and I really enjoy that about your writing.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
And I’m wrong,
like all the times before.
as you loved to remind me.
Love those lines! Beautiful piece. I can relate. You always include mythical people, I like that! Very individual :D Keep writing.
| BearHeart chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
| My Hideing Place chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
oh my flipping gosh! you are the best! i know how you feel! your great!
| unspecified chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
oh my god! this is my life in a nut shell! you did amazing...something bad happens to you, and it leaves a mental scar, and you can never forget it, and sometimes at night the memory creaps up from behind you and scares the hell out of you! you did an amazing job capturing these feelings! i love it! keep writing! and never stop