Reviews for October
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Harsh, forbdoing, pretty deep.

Nicely written.

the Stranger in the moonlight
riotmaker chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
painfully tragic and beautiful.

xoxo
Xerophyte chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
Wow. I love this. It's really short and kind of simple but strangely profound and extremely dramatic. Beautiful.

-Xero
Carp chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
It feels like that last line just stripped everything else away and left just those bare bones. I'm reminded of Sin City when I read this, but yet it goes so much further than that. Excellent.
roxy-babe912 chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
I'm in love with this.

It's killer.
S Noelle Long chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
This is heartbreaking. You can just see someone sitting near to the rain thinking about a love that's lost or never really had in the first place. It's so unrequited and the length gives so much. You didn't need all the words just to get across such feeling.
midnight-angel910 chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
I like this one, its simple yet has this sense of jealousy and wishing, or longing if you will. ps. I love October and rain, especially rain.
Dyrielle chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
This is absolutely lovely, and so sad.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
O...there's something ambiently beautiful and yet dark about this. A really good mystery going on. Kudos, I like this!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Very fascinating, good job. Write on!

Anna _