Reviews for The Eyes
J. G. Scott chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
You wrote this when you were nine? Well, then it's pretty damn good! No criticism here.

By the way, you mentioned RVB in your profile-I love RVB! I'm definitely Church. lol. Sorry if this was random.
scotti chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
BOO! Nice job...creepy, but nice job. ~~Scottie
TT-da-lamanite chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
it was rather wierd? actually i rather liked it. now i will think of the eyes.
Stormie Greye chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Oh...how disturbing and scary to think about. I liked the mood of this. Kinda makes you paranoid if you really read it. Just like the first two lines, "You know someone’s watching, / You feel their eyes on your back."

Nice job. :)
EvT chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Meh... my worst nightmare. I hate being watched. Absolutely hate it. And yea, when I'm walking home in the dark, there's this small alley I always have to walk through, the feeling you describe in the poem always happens to come right then. And, damn, does it freak me out. Heh.

You described it real well too, so kudos to you. Very nice atmosphere you created. xP Just right. )
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Cool...sounds like something Stephen King would write. I enjoyed the mystery and eerie ambience to this, but you know this poem would make a really good horror story!