|Reviews for raw beauty was never this sweet|
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
like it? love it. is it meant to look like a rose, because thats what I get. I love it when people experiment and are different- really intresting formatting here. and i love the ending line: im not thirteen anymore. wow, this is good.
| always gats b y chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
it hurts to grow up when you never even GOT roses at age thirteen;
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| Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
uwah! "i'm not thirteen anymore?" mm-mm-mm-mm-mm. brilliant.