|Reviews for Slave to Dawn, Master to the Twilight|
| sara chapter 6 . 10/5/2006
you meanie! poor Dusk!
| CaFFy chapter 6 . 10/4/2006
| bubble chapter 6 . 10/4/2006
I like this story alot so 's strange but a nice strange.
I wonder what happened in Dawns past to make him react like that?
| another-happy-ending chapter 5 . 10/2/2006
I quite liked that chapter, It felt sort of short, but that is probably because I really wanted to see what happened next. Which is an excellent thing!
[Still writing chapters, let you know soon]
| Okami-wolf chapter 2 . 10/2/2006
i love ur story even though im only on chapter 2 but i hope there will be some love scenes hehe
| Painted Desert chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
keep it up
| CaFFy chapter 5 . 10/2/2006
| another-happy-ending chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
I really do thank you for your reviews. I show my stories to my freinds, and they never actually give me any critisim. They simply blah on about how fantastic it is, when I sigh and mention the word "whatever" a couple of times.
It is sort of annoying to hear that from them, and then go on Fictionpress and read all that fantastic work.
So, to just sum up all the blabber I have just written, thanks for the critique, and thanks for the encoragement.
-grin- You would have a "lot" of fun 'beta-ing' my work, but maybe, once I write a bit more than the two chapters I have. 0.o
| another-happy-ending chapter 4 . 9/28/2006
This is an amazing story, the description and imagery is fantastic.
You have some great ideas, and I love the male/male couples and I love the idea of a pregaunt man with pink hair!
I was deeply saddened when I came to the 4th chapter- please write more! I will be reading every step of the way!
-Thanks for writing-
| CaFFy chapter 3 . 9/22/2006
Whorish is good. it amuses me and I like submissive behaviors. o-o;;
| CaFFy chapter 2 . 9/19/2006
o.O;; Whorish.. o.o;; XD
| Candyfloss Victim chapter 2 . 9/19/2006
certainly different from most of the stuff i've read but it's still really well written! very catchy, i really want to know what the Incident is now...
| tears of emerald chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Ohmygosh! I love it! Please, continue. I really hope you do!
| CaFFy chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Write more soon? ;;
| Azriel McKennitt chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Creative. i love the idea about the gems, and your imagery is beautiful. especially your description of Dusk. Nice work. keep writing!