Reviews for Run
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
I like this, it's an interesting idea, although it's not quite a haiku (the last line has six, rather than five, syllables). Keep writing.

CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
I know how it feels. Good work.
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Wow! That was really good! I loved the flow of it!
Basara chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
run yet reality chases you...

fairytale failure chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
OOh! I love this one!Religion: dislike having up pastafarianism :Pwhat would the flying spaghetti monster do?
rira-chan chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
another great one.

Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
Cool. I like this.
NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
Very well said and to the point. I liked it. And thanks for the review.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
Running, running, sometimes you just have to stand there and face reality though. Good job. God bless.
GeorgyannWayson chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Hum. I never read haikus, but this was ok.

Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Interesting, especially with the whole running themeI liked it