|Reviews for Things To Remember|
| purple x pen chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
wow, its scary how i can relate to your writing, this piece is really powerful, and regretably full of honesty.
| Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Sad, but no less a wonderfully written piece of work. You're an amazing writer!
| Elenive chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
Hm...it's interesting...definitely a good start, but I think you can epand a lot more. The short sentences rush things, which is good in some poems, but it doesn't quite fit in others. I think this poem could be much more powerful if you expand the sentence structure a little and maybe create some imagery or metaphors. Anyway, it's just an idea.
Keep writing, you've got great potential.
And by the way, don't say you're a bad writer. Everyone has room for improvement. : )