Reviews for How Come How come?
Confluence chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Nice poem. It reminds me all too well of my crush on my band teacher...

And the thing about emotions like that is that they repeat, don't make sense, yet make perfect sense. Your poem targeted just that - the whirlwind of a situation when you fall in love with someone you can never have...

Good job.
crimson cyanide chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
How come? I ask myself that every day. I just love this...the only thing I can point out is that you kind of overused "how come", but it's such a crucial question that I can see why you'd want to emphasize it. Simply brilliant.
Sally Can Wait chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
It sounds like a song. :) "How come" may be a teensy bit over used, but it's also what makes it sound song-ish, so whatever.

-Sally Can Wait