| Reviews for Just to See Her Smile |
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   Knightmage chapter 1 . 6/26/2007 ur a heartbreaker. *mock glare :P |
| bukluver 98 chapter 1 . 6/7/2007 Wow! That was so sad and awesome at the same time. I wish a guy would love me like that (only I'd want to know about it). You are very good at getting the emotions to come through, I felt like I was Chase. |
| cookiemonster chapter 1 . 5/30/2007 OMG! You write such heartbreaking stories! But they are so beautiful...tragic at the same time... This is so sad...it left me breathless... I love your writing though...you're the best! |
| your harbor chapter 1 . 5/27/2007 Aw, this was cute and written really, really well. But I bet you already knew that considering I've commented you numerous times. Haha. Good job! |
| elisefey chapter 1 . 5/14/2007 Oh my goodness, that was so beautifully bittersweet. I really loved it. The style and pacing are perfect for the story you're telling. You really make it feel like all that matters to him is taking care of her and keeping her happy. Very nicely done! |
| SPOKENlies-WRITTENtruths chapter 1 . 4/21/2007 Oh *tear* that was beautiful.. ahh the beauty of love Isabella. |
| xo-pauli-ox chapter 1 . 4/19/2007 aww man.. thats so .. sad. buh i lyked how u wrote it. guud work |
| snakes.on.crack chapter 1 . 4/10/2007 *sobs manages to say* that *sniff* was so *sniff* SAD *sobs*...lol... |
| Alva Hesperus chapter 1 . 4/9/2007 You know, I should send my dentist's bill to you, or maybe sue you for giving me cavities. I never liked chocolate, but your story made me rethink about a certain type, called bitter chocolate. Tasty, bitter, but oh so heart-achingly delicious. I do have a question though. At the starting of the story, he has "green eyes". Then somewhere in the middle, when she was announcing something about Florida, he looked at her with "skeptical golden orbs". Not to nit-pick or anything, I just want to know whether those two are the same person. That's all... And with all that done, I shall go retrieve my box of tissue. Good job. ~Davon, a.k.a. Avone of FFnet. |
| miss-hyperactive chapter 1 . 3/23/2007 enchanting. i love unrequited love, it makes a great story. you made an awesome one at that. good job. |
| The Constipated Poet chapter 1 . 3/17/2007 *Sniff* Tissue please. *Cough* *cough* Wonderful, sad story. As a guy, I know i shouldn't be all weepy like this, but your story is just so poignant. It is a masterpiece, really. Thanks dude, this story is certainly a treasure. |
| uomini chapter 1 . 3/15/2007 Oh WOW! That makes my heart cry! That was beautiful! So artistic and the scenes blended so well into one another. AW! It makes me so sad and happy and WAA! That was so beautiful! Wow! You are amazing! And it seemed like a story almost...and the characters seemed real. So sad! SAD! But beautiful. |
| neha chapter 1 . 2/23/2007 That was so I still liked job! |
| imagined insanity chapter 1 . 2/5/2007 so sad... *cries* |
| Semi-CrazyWithaLittleWeirdness chapter 1 . 1/28/2007 can i cry? |