This actually made my heart ache for Chase, and I have to admit that I shed a few tears. Well done, you're an extremely talented author. All your stories/one shot's are seriously amazing and I really hope that one day, you manage to get published! :-)

At first, I was like.. "Is there someone like him? Lord! Give him to me!" I can't believe it. It's very sad, SO sad. :(( I also can't imagine someone so blind, like the girl, that they do not to notice that someone loves them so bad it hurts. Well, if I was the girl and the one I like likes me back, I would not notice what happens around me as well. So in a way, I also see it in the point of view of the girl. :( Very Good story. It really captured the "Unconditional Love" theme. BRAVO! :D

Yes... I am an undeniable sap. And yes... the story gave me pains in the chest. And yes I do believe you should write a sequel where Chase finds a lovley lady that reminds me of myself and they live happily ever after whilst Lyn finally realizes that she was secretly in love with Chase for all those years. But he's mine o_O

No seriously, your story was epic. I love your writing style.

Oh my goodness, I loved this. It's so rare to find a *good* unrequited love story, but this... Is one of my favorites. It's so sweet and sad... I love it. )

AWWWW...

She can have that other dude. I'll take Chase.

Tsk. The pain of unrequited love. You portrayed the feeling very well.

Goodness, this is only the second story I've read from you, but both are so sad! But I liked it none the less :)

Even though it is a one shot, it would make for a great story to continue with it.

why? why? why? people like chase should end up happy, it's so unfair and how could lyn be so blind. Unrequited love, one of the saddest things in the world.

Aw. Puppy howl.

I just love how you portray the guys loving the girls just as much, and maybe even more than the girls do from first bat. It's really awesome because it renews everybodies faith out there, that someday a guy will love you just as much as you love the idea of being in love. :)

I just reviewed your other story, and looking at the reviews I spy that there is a sequel to the story? YAY!

This made me cry a little...

Maybe there already is but have you considered a sequeal? I know it's been a while but...

Anyway this was so sad :'(

Wow. for some reason, my mind flicked to boys over flowers... heartache right there for the one who watchs a love see only someone else~

'aww..poor Chase..so heartbreaking and sad..

If I were Aelyn i would never let Chase go..

Aelyn is so lucky to have Chase by her side..

anyways, even though it's frustrating that they

didn'tend up together, this fic is great..! :)

I hope there are still guys out there like Chase.! :))

you break my heart...

*sniffle*

lollz

luv ur writing...

maybe you should get yourself published?

good luck..

Forever and always

Just Another Fan

sequel? please? :( its so sad

and chase is such a hot name.. they have to get together!