Aw! Oh, my gosh! I loved it, but it was so sad! I think every girl should have a guy like Chase!

So heartbreaking! But it happen all the time to people who don't speak out their feelings...

Holy-! Wow! I just read your other oneshot called "Keep it a Secret"... and it was so lovely although painfully heartbreaking... I totally enjoyed your writing style so I checked out your profile... and here's another cry-worthy piece written so well. :D

You sure have a way with breaking people's hearts. *lol* I mean that in a good way. ;)

Aw, this was so sad. :(

However, I enhoyed reading this one-shot.

OMG! I LOVE THIS ONE-SHOT! Which is saying sumthing cuz im not a one shot kind of person

Love

OH MY GOD. :(

I HATE AND LOVE UNREQUITED LOVE! :

Dammit. :/

LOVED THIS STORY THO! ))

this made me cry:( you should be proud of your work i love it:)

It's great...unrequited love. Kinda frustrating, but that's the way it's supposed to be, right? :) awesome.

indeed a very bittersweet story :( but still very well written and i love this till the end.

That was so... sad :(( Poor guy...

Brilliant writing though and wow, just wow.

Thank you for the wonderful (and heart-wrenching D:) story!

Aw, this was very sad to read but sweet! True that it was bittersweet and it almost made me want to cry but still it was awesome! Though I think he's a masochist, but a very sweet masochist (: Hope to read ur other stories someday ;D

stupid girl for not seeing that he loves her. and stupid chase for not telling her, saying, pick me, choose me! god damn, unrequited love is so hard. i hate it, but its so bittersweet and oh so beutiful.

it's so beautiful and sweet..oh god..i can almost feel the pain of the guy..how can lyn be so oblivious...?

Awesome story..it broke my heart when she asked him to walk down aisle with her..i could feel chase hurting..!

The story is amazing

This is a living proof of love at first sight..!:))

That is what happened between me and the story..!

Awesome..awesome...and awesome..!