|Reviews for Him|
| emilybh chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
I like this!
| little boy on her bike chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
this is kinda depressing, in an excellent sort of way.
| sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Interesting. ;) I like how the last line is italicized, it makes it kinda cool. (oh, and unique I might add ;) hehe.)
| brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
That's so...sad and pretty at the same time. Aw...I feel so bad for her. ( Happy endings always make me smile, but sad endings are always the ones that are the most memorable. I really liked this little bit. It was good in the way that it didn't spoil the effectiveness of the ending of 'Zora Ink' but added to it. Great job!
| SirScott chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
That was cool. I liked how the vampire refered to her victim as prey.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
| gabriellafaith chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
wow. that was...different lol in a good way dont worry update soon
| WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
My prediction was right! It IS hot. (you'll see in my e-mail) _
I like this. It was kind of...angsty, in a way, but Zora's portrayal was great. A man who looks like Braeden...at least Zora was satisfied. Great work!
| Durandel chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
DARK! Man that was creepy, but it was good, the way you wrote it made it good.
| Anaare chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
What a wonderful dark story! Though I have not read much of Zora Ink, I really enjoyed reading this piece. I'll have to check out the rest sometime soon. The title works well, too. Simply "Him". Well done and keep at it!
P.S.: Thank you for all the reviews! Greatly appreciated.
| Spirit Tigress chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
The end was kinda sad. Even if it wasn't intended to be funny, I always thought the prey thing was kinda hilarious.