Reviews for Him
emilybh chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
I like this!
little boy on her bike chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
this is kinda depressing, in an excellent sort of way.
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Interesting. ;) I like how the last line is italicized, it makes it kinda cool. (oh, and unique I might add ;) hehe.)

- Sarah
brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
That's so...sad and pretty at the same time. Aw...I feel so bad for her. ( Happy endings always make me smile, but sad endings are always the ones that are the most memorable. I really liked this little bit. It was good in the way that it didn't spoil the effectiveness of the ending of 'Zora Ink' but added to it. Great job!
SirScott chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
That was cool. I liked how the vampire refered to her victim as prey.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott
gabriellafaith chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
wow. that was...different lol in a good way dont worry update soon
WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
My prediction was right! It IS hot. (you'll see in my e-mail) _

I like this. It was kind of...angsty, in a way, but Zora's portrayal was great. A man who looks like Braeden...at least Zora was satisfied. Great work!

Shane
Durandel chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
DARK! Man that was creepy, but it was good, the way you wrote it made it good.
Niels Stegeman chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
What a wonderful dark story! Though I have not read much of Zora Ink, I really enjoyed reading this piece. I'll have to check out the rest sometime soon. The title works well, too. Simply "Him". Well done and keep at it!

P.S.: Thank you for all the reviews! Greatly appreciated.
Spirit Tigress chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
The end was kinda sad. Even if it wasn't intended to be funny, I always thought the prey thing was kinda hilarious.