Reviews for What Matters
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
I really enjoyed this sad, heartfelt one shot! I think you can make a full length story out of this! Great work!
heal me forever chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
gosh dat was sad yet good :)
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
aww:D really cute!
Your Girl chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
I know you're getting really good reviews, and I hate to be the first bad one, but I didn't think this was some of your better work. It was very unrealistic. Why be invisible? Gossip was a poor excuse. And Andrew. Why now? And why couldn't he pronounce her last name or point her out in class? And why did the doctor's office send a letter instead of having a meeting? Why would her parents bring it to her at school instead of waiting? Not that they should wait, it just sounds more like something parents would do. And why would Andrew kiss her? Technically, he doesn't even know her anymore. I'm sorry, but this wasn't your best.
AlreadyGone chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
This is really sweet. She could have had a better initial reaction to the letter, like denying it a little more before it sunk in or you could have mentioned how it did sink in a little more. But I like it, and it's really cute, sweet, and actually inspiring. You're a talented author. (:
fariswheel chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
aww, i love it, you are amazing
U NV me chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
This is really good...

And as for that song, I think it might be White Flag, because I vaguely remember that had something to do with cancer. Its really, really old, so its probably not the one you were talking about.
Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Ha, well I think I might one of those "tongue-piercing punks" without the piercings. My parents don't want me getting any piercing on my face- ever, but we'll se about that. Right, the story. I think it was good, but the cancer thing was too pedictable. Yes, I do feel for the girl, but I don't believe in blending in. I believe in standing out and saying what I think, so at first I couldn't understand this girl. I still liked the story though, especially Andrew. He's nice, which definitely is good. And I would hate it if people treated me differently if I had cancer. And actually, I think it might be people like Andrew who make cancer patients not give up, even with the horrible chem and what not. And stories like these are those that motivate people. Whether it's a problem related to love, an illness or anything in the world. These stories can cause change. A few typed out words. Fancy that!
blurrylights chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Oh wow...romance and tragedy. You're into the whole kill two birds with one stone thing, eh? :)

Just joking...I liked it. I wanted more, but it was good for a one shot. :)
MyDecoy chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
GAHH!

I loved it

it was sad, but i still loved it ]
candykillz chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
aww.. that's so cute! they met up again!)
Artemis Rampant chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
This isn't one of your favorites, but it's one of mine. It almost made me cry. What a perfect moment for that boy from your childhood to return...wow. This was really well written, too. Excellent job!
ellebelle chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
this was REALLY good! i think you should consider maybe making this a fic. it might be really good...
melbell chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
that was so cute, i just might go read it again.
zanessa1215 chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
That is so sad I almost cried!
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