Reviews for Left to Cry
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
i liked the line "tear stained eyes"
Daiysis chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
I've read few of your other haikus and I've noticed that you have a tendency to write with simplicity and yet get very powerful emotions across to the person reading. I find it really hard to do that, and with that said, it looks as if you do it so easily... Great work
mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
I generally find haiku to be too short and emotionless, but you've captured my interest with yours. I loved this one. It is... so true, for so many people. Wonderful job.

-stix-
Aomera chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
i love the second line especially. works really well as such a short piece. all the poems of yours ive read are so sad! but theyre good so yeh. well done! :)
O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
wow, nice job. in a matter of short words, you nicely captured or described the emotions.
j'aimemavie chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
oh no, that's so sad... but its really good
GeminiJ37 chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
Sounds like how my ex left me. It still hurts.
Jinx1624 chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
An oh so familiar feeling...good stuff .
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I know exactly how that feels. Great job showing so much pain in so little of words. And thanks for the reviews.
star-wars-rocks chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
this was very nice and full of emotion. you know that everyone's felt like that at least one time in their life. i loved it!
Alameda chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
Rad stuff. I often overlook haikus, but this one really caught my attention
peteygirl chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
i have felt like this so many times. so so so many times.
eraced chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
darkly beautiful. nice work.~erAced~
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
oh, I adore it, it's so sad. Lovely.
rira-chan chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
great work! it's very full of emotion and whatnot. i really really liked this.

~rira-chan

P.s thank you for your reviews on my poetry!
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