Reviews for This Way
Basara chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
ouch...

nice..
citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
oh intriging! this is good, i like how it ends with the ... really effective, but i think theres a typo: suppose/ supposed. ?
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
Short but with a good message. Keep writing.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Hmm, not an expert on haiku. Good job though, I think I get it...
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Great job on this! I love it!
D. A. Emme chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Good poem. It can mean anything basically.