|Reviews for This Way|
| Basara chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
oh intriging! this is good, i like how it ends with the ... really effective, but i think theres a typo: suppose/ supposed. ?
| CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
Short but with a good message. Keep writing.
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Hmm, not an expert on haiku. Good job though, I think I get it...
| Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Great job on this! I love it!
| D. A. Emme chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Good poem. It can mean anything basically.