Reviews for Lemon Crème
TheLadyPendragon chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
This is such a cute little oneshot. It made me smile the whole way through-especially the ending. So cute. It was just so obvious that it was unexpected. Just go up to eachother and ask... XDD An both of them waited years. You should do one in Marushi's point of view. 'He came in everyday and ordered something lemony' lol
RoughDraftHero chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Like that other reviewer said, food and love. m. :)
Ieshwar chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
“You taste like lemons,” He says after breaking away, but remaining inches from me.

“Really? You taste like heaven,” I reply and feel the corners of my lips stretch and I realize I’m smiling.

WOW! These two lines made me completely melt! This was too cute. I really liked the story. Yay yay!

Thanks! :D
hermione chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
“You taste like lemons,” He says after breaking away, but remaining inches from me.

“Really? You taste like heaven,” I reply and feel the corners of my lips stretch and I realize I’m smiling.

WOW! These two lines made me completely melt! This was too cute. I really liked the story. Yay yay!

Thanks! :D
Durationzzz chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
The ending was really cute! I liked it a lot!
Amindaya chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
This is WAY cute. I remember reading it forever ago, before I even had an account. I found it in a C2.

But, yeah, adorable.
bree-jay chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
hott1 i loved it especally the whole leamon thing. food and love.
CharismaticOutCry chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Hi!

I really like this story. I love the way it's wriiten and set out, and the ending!

He has a bit of a lemon obsession. Lol.

It's really good!
Insomiak chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Favourite line: "The baker who I am completely infatuated with just licked my face."

Very cute!
Back of Beyond chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Sweet! :]
slash.obsessed.fangirl-42 chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Aww, that's so cute! I notice that you switched tenses a couple times, but it wasn't too noticeable. Great job!

-kyra
bleepbloopbanana chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Holy shit. You do NOT know how long I've been searching for this story. I read it quite a while ago, and these two lines just stuck with me.

'“You taste like lemons,” He says after breaking away, but remaining inches from me. “Really? You taste like heaven,” I reply and feel the corners of my lips stretch and I realize I’m smiling.'

And I couldn't remember anything else, not even the title, and I was so frustrated because I couldn't find it ANYWHERE! And I think I turned emo for a few hours at least... it was awful. -sniff-

But now here it is! And I couldn't favorite it fast enough, I swear. The writing style isn't anything spectacular or orignial ... its not HOW you're writing, it's WHAT.

Forget plot and grammar and spelling, I'm just madly in love with the feeling behind this piece. You do great work, keep writing!

-Bleep
The Candle Thief chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Aw! That made my heart melt! That was so cute! It's on my faves now!
Seque Me ad Meum Somnium chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
That was a really sweet story! Ha ha, no pun intended. I would like to meet a true love like that. And I too love lemon flavored, your characters have good taste!
Rock on an Ocean Shore chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
Lovely. Heart-warming.

I liked it a lot. :D
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