Aw! That was fantastic, well done with it!
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So it's 2:30 a.m. And I found this story and just now finished it I am just saying this has to be one of my faves! :)

A lot of people wonder on here why she'd stay with chris cause of doing pot? Well I think its completely fine. Weed is more healthy than cigarrettes yet people don't mind being around that. As of right now, I think chris is a really sweet guy considering he cares what Lydia thinks. Its sad to know he's stoned most of the time though so the real him is never really there but maybe we'll see that real Chris soon? (;

Its been a while since I've read a story on here that played with my emotions. This definitely does the trick! I felt the adrenaline, butterflies, anger, jelousy, EVERYTHING! I love seth's character. He's perfect in a way that isn't revolting. I find lydia's conscience really annoying and 'cause she's a wise-ass but cause its confusing and at times, pointless. The story could do without it but I guess it'd be less funny without it. Another thing I noticed is how you stress the fact that Los Angeles is where they live and how they say 'they went out to the city' a lot. I'm an LA girl and we don't usually say Los Angeles cause its too formal and we don't 'go out to the city' since everything IS a city. Even just outside on the yard. But I guess not everyone knows this unless you live here but I'm just sharing this fact :P

Hi. I really liked your story and its cute story. :D I can't believe that Chris is pothead and jerk cheater asshole. Poor Lydia. I glad that Stephanie and Lydia finally be friends again. I glad that Hayden is great friend. I am so happily that Lydia and Seth finally be the hot couples now. :) I wonder if you write Hayden or Stephanie's story? Keep writing :D

your a funny author i loved your story so... sweet and funny at the same time. it was a great story.

This is a good start. I think my fav character in this story is going to be her conscience (I know, it's not actually a separate character, but still). The fact that she argues with herself is hilarious. It reminds me of me. Can't wait to read more!

hehe... i just stumbled across your story and thought id read it...

:) smiles!

I like the whole concept of this story, but it needs a big tidy up (try not to take offence, I'm trying to be helpful.) I really don't think the internal arguing is necessary and it looks a bit amateurish, I like how you space out your writing though, it helps us ADD people pay attention. But although, I think a lot of unnecessary parts could be cut out, especially the scene in the restaurant with Seth, Chris and Nicky. There was just way to much to detail at that point. /criticism :p

Really great chap. The plot is developing well.

I love it so far. Even though it is kinda bad what she is going thru there is so much humour in the relationship between her and Seth

Awesome first chap! I love her attitude. So far so good, cant wait to see what happens next. Great introductions, I love how you(the reader) just get thrown in. There is no thousand-word intro that doesnt even have a purpose, it draws you in immediately. Great work. I will definitely continue this one,

Rosalie Abigail

Loved it . ]

Cute story .

very good...its so cute and realistic

Pardon the non-sentence, but...EH!

I love it!