|Reviews for Lens of a Leaf|
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
this is absolutely amazing. how have i never read this. the construction is perfect, the rhyme is carried beautifully and you have fit some fabulous language into the scheme.
the entire image and concept is so well inspired i want to fall at your feet wayne's world style, lol. each painted picture is so breath-takingly beautiful. you've done a magnificent job!
| Politically Incorrect Lamb chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
This changed a lot from the little bits I saw on receipt paper...holy crap woman. Your vocabulary is growing substantially, I feel left behind sometimes. Are we callousing with bark, you and I?
| Chemically Induced chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
you're a wonderful poet. i almost forgot how engagine your style is or how honed you command is over words. the imagis here are so vivide, sick and cold, but pretty, full of sorrow. "like the trees" works very well, they way it is used. a great extended metaphor poem. :)