|Reviews for Pluto, the planet that wasn't|
| Philip A. Troy chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
It is good to see that someone else out there at least has a marked respect for Pluto. As my favorite of the celestial bodies and my governing planet, it broke my heart when they removed it from the planetary roster back on August 24, 2006 (Rest in Peace, Pluto).
An excellent poem, and one I deeply enjoy. Your prose is fantastic, and your wording is magnificent. Phrasing such as "orbiting solar in elliptic arc" show you have a beauteous understanding of our solar system, as well as "danced inside the sea god's line", which also shows you can write with a dramatic exemplification of the English language.
Please keep up your writing. It is fantastic and I enjoyed it tremendously.
-Philip A. Troy