You know, normally stories start out amazing...and by the middle...they get...average.

This is the opposite!

I love love love adore the whole Simon complication! Definitely did not see that one coming!

Honestly, I really want Jase to end up with Simon. Not that I don't like Skye...but poor Simon is in love with Jase. :(

Though do another Skye chapter and I'd probably be in love with him. And Jase is supposed to be with him...:/

Ahh, I'm actually not sure who I want him with now. I'm confused...just like Jase! And that's fabulous!

Keep writing, you're awesome. Oh and nice cliffie. :P

ZOMG! Please update soon! XD

There is too much to say about this whole story for me to type(i don't feel like keeling my fingers)I just have to say:"badawsome"

i'm loving how coincidental those fortune cookies tend to be.

although, i did once recieve one that told me to eat more fortune cookies. i also got one about a week or two later that told me to eat less fortune cookies...

Oh my goodness. I can see awkward scene ensuing. I honestly can't decide who I'd rather Jason was with... but I'm leaning toward Simon because I like his character a lot. Continue with your general awesomeness!

First of all, Happy birthday! :D

Secondly:

No! He SHOULDNT BE WITH SKYE! SKYE IS A GOOD-FOR-NAUGHT JERK (well, not really, but seriously...) AND HE MUST BE WITH SIMON! I love Simon...he's so sweet and fun...not to mention so blatantly in love with him it's not even funny...and he really brings out the best in Jason. And I must say, I love it when Simon calls him "Jase"...I think it's too cute. THen the whole thing with him keeping the picture only because Jason was in it, and the nude picture thing...then the taking pictures all around the city. I don't know, I just htink it's all fabulous. :D

Anyway, terrific job!

dreamerdoll

I love the JasonxSimon pairing. Its so cute.

Well, maybe it's for the best that Jason see Skye dating Gage. I really like how Simon brings out the playful side of him.

Hmm... I can almost tell what this might cause later on... another hook-up with Simon. I can be wrong but knowing Jason... gaah! It's supposed Jason and Skye!

I really would like to read Skye's POV though because if he doesn't end up with Simon at least I'll know more about this Gage dude.

P.S.

Happy Birthday!

SIMON MUST WIN. IF HE DOES NOT THEN I WILL SIC MY ARMY OF FLYING MONKEYS ON YOU.

I have to say I fell sorry for Jason and that he sure is strange. lol The story kind of drives me crazy, but thats a good thing because least I'm hooked. I was hooked on Skye from the begining of course but with Simon now in the picture I am sort of feeling that torn thing like Jason. Though when I read the parts with him and Jase, I feel kind of feel awkward. Is that odd? Oh well...If in the end he doesn't bag Skye, Simon would be my other choice. *shrug* Hm, curious about the ending of this chapter, wonder what will happen next. Update soon (when you can)!

Ugh Jason, gah tell Skye!

Somehow now I don't like skye anymore.

I knew there'd end up being a Skye moment to throw a spanner in the works...

Aww i really love Simon - he's so - interesting, but i like Skye too - and now you've got me all tied in knots with who to cheer for _

ah well, hope you have a great birthday :throws confetti and streamer::

::much love::

'raven

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good chapter even if it's not really eventful...anyways I think I would prefer that Jason went with Skye! Simon is charming but I feel he deserves another person than Jason. I hope you'll update soon. anyway, I am patiently awaiting the next chapter!

oh yay finally. the ultimate showdown between the 3 of them. anyhow, it'll be nice to see jase slowly start falling for simon since he is quite a nice bloke. and the picture taking thing? fantastic idea. always thought candid pictures bring on the best kinds of memories.

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