Reviews for Anxious
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
That's why I replaced my analagous with a digital. ;)
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Great job!

The last line was brilliant, almost even malicious. Really excellnt job!

~the Stranger in the moonlight~
Dr. Self Destruct chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Hehe, I love it! And I swear, I think time laughs at us all as we try to ignore it.

Once again, very nice. Keep up the beautiful work. )
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
Very cleverly written, I like this a lot. Great work!
sporkofdoom chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
Very nice. I know exactly what this feels like, and the ending made me laugh.
Anaare chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
An interesting poem, which I enjoyed reading. I liked the image this gave me. Well done!
Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
I love the last line. This is very good poem. Short and to the point. I feel like this someties. Most of the time actually... Very good.

WILLOW-1992 chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
i liked the last line of this. awesome.
Terence the Terrible chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
The weird thing is...I actually feel like this ALL THE TIME! It's so bad, I've actually lain awake at night staring at the clock...That ticking is ominous. That ticking is's the inevitable. It's the unavoidable. It's a constant reminder of the frailty of mortality. I guess what I'm trying to say in a round-about way is...I LOVE THIS! Keep writing!
RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
wow totally not was I was expecting. that's good. I like that the clock was ticking in a stieful way. lol.