Wow, really Good one-shot! Thumbs up!

Aw, I still want to know her name.

This is really kind of warped and twisted... but intriguing as well. It's a really strange view point on things but I like it :)

oh.

oh.

oh gawd.

-dies-

interseting

omg, this is really good! great work, seriously. ]

This was so good...amazing. It was deep and chilling, and the emotion was beautifully portrayed. I read it just before I went to sleep, and it was just ringing in my head. Beautifully done.

Wow... That was brilliant! But I'm sad he never got her name.

That was really cool, it had an interesting beginning and well...wow!

Oh dear.

This is, amazing.

Brilliance.

Where did you get this idea?

I've never read anything like this. Anything.

Oh. Wow.

Speechless.

kthnxbai,

Martin the Waterskier

Wow deep. I love it. It's so surreal. But totally truthful. Amazing really it was.

whoa...

very inspiring... and it makes you think...

Where did you get your idea?

I can't wait to read some of your other works.

~WIND~

this was kinda cool.

it's pretty good and I like it. It's just unsettling because I am a lot like that girl and I think a lot like her, and seeing it written down and not in my head, well it's different. But I'm glad you wrote it, because now I know that it's not as stupid as I feared that it was.

Usually when I see one-shots I check the scroll bar thingy to see if I'm actually going to read it. Any other story and I would have ran away screaming.

But this one had me form the beggining. It was fast-paced, believable and not believable in this crazily awesome way. This is the best piece of fiction I've read today. I have one more thing left to say.

Woah.